能否批改一下我寫的2010年考研英語小作文？

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• 百同學
  英語零基礎怎么學習考研英語作文
  • 杜老師
    英語作文的提高其實和大家平時的積累息息相關。在平時多背一些經(jīng)典詞句段落，可能在寫作的時候不太能夠想起來，但是確實是積累了語感，對寫作也是很有幫助的。尤其是考試時候的英語作文，其實卷面的整潔與否真的很重要。大多數(shù)人其實在考試時的發(fā)揮都差不多，如果你的作文比較整潔，文字清晰，必然會讓改卷老師產(chǎn)生好印象，作文得分也能夠相對提高。
• 江同學
  關于高學歷能否找到好工作的英語作文
  • 徐老師
    now increasingly competitive and to find a job is too difficult. some people think that highly educated must be able to find a good job because education can prove that a person has a good capacity. in addition the company is now the interviews are generally required a high academic qualification so that the highly educated is looking for a job a stepping-stone. others would argue that education does not necessarily able to find a good job and now the community talking about the working ability and efficiency for example some people had high academic qualifications but his ability is very limited. in my opinion although education does not necessarily allow you to find a good job and when he can at least help you find a good job