能否評價一下我寫的這篇考研英語作文?

希望老師可以給我的作文做一些評價,謝謝老師!

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2021-12-12 19:21:58
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  • 老師 高頓財經(jīng)研究院老師
    高頓為您提供一對一解答服務(wù),關(guān)于能否評價一下我寫的這篇考研英語作文?我的回答如下:

    7分

    1. 第二段第一句,I wonder if it is a great idea...注意it后面加is

    2. 第二段第二行,street前面應(yīng)該是想用crowded吧

    3. will be held,注意這里的hold要變形

    4. next Monday前面的on去掉,并且Monday首字母大寫

     


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