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• C同學(xué)
  英語考研作文話題模板
  • 譚老師
    (1)as is vividly depicted in the picture(描述圖畫).(2) the most striking feature is(圖畫重點(diǎn)信息).(3)there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
    第二自然段重點(diǎn)論述主題，第一句可以用一個有爆發(fā)力的主題句闡釋主題的重要性。第二句談這個現(xiàn)象的永恒的社會意義可以用一個排比句說明只要有這個現(xiàn)象就可以讓我們不斷征服挑戰(zhàn)和競爭并最后走向成功。第三句可以是具體的例子談根據(jù)一項調(diào)查表明這個積極的現(xiàn)象對人有利。第四句可以從反面談如果沒有這個積極現(xiàn)象人們生活就憂悶有挫折感無前進(jìn)動力前途渺茫。第五句作總結(jié)，談只有這個現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者。
    (1)as is symbolically depicted/shown in the set of drawings the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that 主題 is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)undoubtedly it is 主題 that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulties that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for success. (3) according to a survey made by china daily 與主題相關(guān)的好的后果.(4)if 不這樣的話 we will live a dull and depressing life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (5)only by 主題 can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society。
    第三段為結(jié)束段落，總結(jié)全文內(nèi)容并提出建議。首句可以說無論做大事還是小事無論做難事還是容易事都要這個積極現(xiàn)象。第二個句子談建議讓它變的更好。第三個句子談讓它變的更好的方法通常發(fā)揮它的好處避免壞處。第四句談只要有這個積極現(xiàn)象就會享受一個美好豐富和有活力的未來。
    (1)from the above analysis it can be safely concluded that in doing things whether great or small 主題is indispensable on the way to success. (2)it is therefore necessary that some effective measures are taken to make 主題more efficient. (3)on one hand we should raise our awareness of its significance of 主題. on the other hand 不這樣的現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該批評. (4)only with主題 can we embrace a glorious future.
• 丹同學(xué)
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  • 熊老師
    初試科目 ①101政治 ②226二外(俄語)或227二外(日語)或228二外(德語)或229二外(法語) ③611英語實(shí)踐 ④813英語專業(yè)基礎(chǔ)及綜合(英語語言學(xué)、英美文學(xué)、英美概況、現(xiàn)代漢語及中國現(xiàn)當(dāng)代文學(xué)基礎(chǔ)) 復(fù)試備注 除亞非語言文學(xué)外不招跨專業(yè)考生 復(fù)試科目英語語言學(xué)與英美文學(xué)基礎(chǔ)
• 暗同學(xué)
  高考英語作文套路及優(yōu)美語句
  • 侯老師
    .one is always on a strange road watching strange scenery and listening to strange music. then one day you will find that the things you try hard to forget are already gone.
    一個人總要走陌生的路，看陌生的風(fēng)景，聽陌生的歌，然后在某個不經(jīng)意的瞬間，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)，原本是費(fèi)盡心機(jī)想要忘記的事情真的就那么忘記了。
    
    2.happiness is not about being immortal nor having food or rights in one's hand. it’s about having each tiny wish come true or having something to eat when you are hungry or having someone's love when you need love.
    幸福，不是長生不老，不是大魚大肉，不是權(quán)傾朝野。幸福是每一個微小的生活愿望達(dá)成。當(dāng)你想吃的時候有得吃，想被愛的時候有人來愛你。
    　　
    3.love is a lamp while friendship is the shadow. when the lamp is offyou will find the shadow everywhere. friend is who can give you strength at last. 　
    愛情是燈，友情是影子，當(dāng)燈滅了，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)你的周圍都是影子。朋友，是在最后可以給你力量的人。　
    
    4.i love you not for who you are but for who i am before you.
    我愛你不是因為你是誰，而是我在你面前可以是誰。
    
    5.love makes man grow up or sink down. 　
    愛情，要么讓人成熟，要么讓人墮落?！?
    
    6.if you can hold something up and put it down it is called weight-lifting if you can hold something up but can never put it downit's called burden-bearing. pitifully most of people are bearing heavy burdens when they are in love. 　
    舉得起放得下的叫舉重，舉得起放不下的叫負(fù)重。可惜，大多數(shù)人的愛情，都是負(fù)重的。
    
    7.we all live in the past. we take a minute to know someone one hour to like someone and one day to love someone but the whole life to forget someone.
    我們每個人都生活在各自的過去中，人們會用一分鐘的時間去認(rèn)識一個人，用一小時的時間去喜歡一個人，再用一天的時間去愛上一個人，到最后呢，卻要用一輩子的時間去忘記一個人。
    
    8.one may fall in love with many people during the lifetime. when you finally get your own happiness you will understand the previous sadness is kind of treasure which makes you better to hold and cherishthe people you love. 　　
    一個人一生可以愛上很多的人，等你獲得真正屬于你的幸福之后，你就會明白一起的傷痛其實(shí)是一種財富，它讓你學(xué)會更好地去把握和珍惜你愛的人。