這是根據(jù)預(yù)測(cè)作文(信任)改寫的考研英語作文，第二段是否有點(diǎn)牽強(qiáng)？

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• C同學(xué)
  英語考研作文話題模板
  • 潘老師
    (1)as is vividly depicted in the picture(描述圖畫).(2) the most striking feature is(圖畫重點(diǎn)信息).(3)there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
    第二自然段重點(diǎn)論述主題，第一句可以用一個(gè)有爆發(fā)力的主題句闡釋主題的重要性。第二句談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的永恒的社會(huì)意義可以用一個(gè)排比句說明只要有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象就可以讓我們不斷征服挑戰(zhàn)和競爭并最后走向成功。第三句可以是具體的例子談根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明這個(gè)積極的現(xiàn)象對(duì)人有利。第四句可以從反面談如果沒有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象人們生活就憂悶有挫折感無前進(jìn)動(dòng)力前途渺茫。第五句作總結(jié)，談只有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會(huì)的成功者。
    (1)as is symbolically depicted/shown in the set of drawings the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that 主題 is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)undoubtedly it is 主題 that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulties that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for success. (3) according to a survey made by china daily 與主題相關(guān)的好的后果.(4)if 不這樣的話 we will live a dull and depressing life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (5)only by 主題 can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society。
    第三段為結(jié)束段落，總結(jié)全文內(nèi)容并提出建議。首句可以說無論做大事還是小事無論做難事還是容易事都要這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象。第二個(gè)句子談建議讓它變的更好。第三個(gè)句子談讓它變的更好的方法通常發(fā)揮它的好處避免壞處。第四句談只要有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象就會(huì)享受一個(gè)美好豐富和有活力的未來。
    (1)from the above analysis it can be safely concluded that in doing things whether great or small 主題is indispensable on the way to success. (2)it is therefore necessary that some effective measures are taken to make 主題more efficient. (3)on one hand we should raise our awareness of its significance of 主題. on the other hand 不這樣的現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該批評(píng). (4)only with主題 can we embrace a glorious future.
• 百同學(xué)
  英語零基礎(chǔ)怎么學(xué)習(xí)考研英語作文
  • 鄭老師
    英語作文的提高其實(shí)和大家平時(shí)的積累息息相關(guān)。在平時(shí)多背一些經(jīng)典詞句段落，可能在寫作的時(shí)候不太能夠想起來，但是確實(shí)是積累了語感，對(duì)寫作也是很有幫助的。尤其是考試時(shí)候的英語作文，其實(shí)卷面的整潔與否真的很重要。大多數(shù)人其實(shí)在考試時(shí)的發(fā)揮都差不多，如果你的作文比較整潔，文字清晰，必然會(huì)讓改卷老師產(chǎn)生好印象，作文得分也能夠相對(duì)提高。
• N同學(xué)
  英語作文求職信怎么寫
  • 趙老師
    寫求職信的目的是申請(qǐng)某個(gè)職位。求職信的內(nèi)容簡單，主題明確。求職信屬于正式信件，因此要求寫出寫信人的地址及收信人的地址。寫信人的地址寫在右上角，收信人的地址寫在左下角，稱呼一般應(yīng)為：dear sir or madam。結(jié)束語也要正規(guī)，如：yours faithfully sincerely yours等。
    求職信的主體部分一般包括三部分：
    　 -、陳述自己應(yīng)聘的職位，通常包含信息來源，以及對(duì)自己的簡單介紹。
    　 二、介紹自身的條件，主要包括在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)、工作經(jīng)歷和本人的個(gè)性及特長等，以說明自己符合該職位的要求。
    　 三、客套話，如：希望對(duì)方盡早回復(fù)，或安排面試、回信、來電等，并向?qū)Ψ奖硎靖兄x。
    　 在寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)充分表達(dá)自己對(duì)該工作的渴望，態(tài)度要誠懇。對(duì)自己工作經(jīng)歷和特長的陳述要符合實(shí)際，不能夸大其詞。最后，要提供自己的聯(lián)系方式，可指明附件中提供有哪些證明材料。
    注意以下語句的使用：
    1. i have learned in the local newspaper that you need a ...
    2. i think i meet / satisfy your requirements.
    3. i have enclosed my resume.
    4. looking forward to your reply.
    5. i would be very thankful if you could ...
    6. i am very interested in ...
    7. i should be grateful for an early reply.
    請(qǐng)閱讀下面的一封求職信范文：
    p. o. box 21
    dong cheng district
    july 1st 2006
    a512
    charlie office
    dear sir or madam
    
    　　i wish to apply for the position of secretary which you have recently advertised in the local newspaper. i am going to graduate from cambridge university this summer and get my b.a. degree in british and american literature.
    　　i think that i meet the requirements in your advertisement. i am a top student in our college with one-year experience as a part-time secretary in a big company. i have also attended several meetings and exhibitions on behalf of the company to introduce products to potential customers.
    　　i would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company if necessary. or you can contact me at 13506849856 for further information.
    thank you for your consideration of my application. i am looking forward to your reply.
    yours sincerely
    mike townsend